Would you continue reading this? 10pts?

This is good. Naturally, I have no context if this is the middle of a story. I am curious as to what's going on with Hannah and why "I" thinks drinking is so impure, and what she found out, what is over. Something felt off, though, and I think it might be that "I" goes through these actions kind of robotically. I would insert more of his emotions and reactions into this encounter. Surely Hannah's actions are throwing him for a loop, but it doesn't completely throw the reader for a loop because I, for one, did not feel completely connected to "I." Perhaps it's just because it's such a short segment. You've got the use of strong verbs and succulent adjectives going, for sure.